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Describe our observations without saying..
Remember to use your 5 senses: see, taste, hear smell, feels /touch
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Angrily stamping his feet moodily.
Leaning to smash the ball over the net.
Tear dripping sweat on a sunny day.
Muscles moving in slow motion.
Tatted net swaying in the air.
The church standing proudly in the sunlight.
Birds chirping in the background as the ball gets abused.
Sky light is shining on the glossy leaves.
The sun reflecting shadows onto the concrete.
